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Sunday, November 25, 2012
2nd journal
I would like to participat with you one of my travels story . Four years ago my friend and I were thinking about where can we have our holyday , so we dicaided to go to Indonesia , thus we made all our booking from the Internet , and we went there , actually it was very nice place , a lot of green areas there and raining all the day , the weather was very amazing , first we spend a week in Jakarta city the capital city in Indonesia , it was very crowded , and I named it with non-sleeping city , because any time you want to go around you will feel as if it is in the morning , and you will found what ever you are looking for such as restaurant , gardens and local markets , after that we traveled to Bonchak , where is the beautiful mountains and the greatest weather .
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wow it seems like exciting trip, it is an expensive country?
ReplyDeleteWow! Indonesia sounds amazing! I would love to visit it. Check some of your word choices..."participate" isn't the word you need here. Also...fewer commas, more periods.
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