Sunday, December 9, 2012

4th journal

     Last Friday my friend and I were  going to carting place . Carting is a kind of car racing , actually we dicaided wher exactly we are going and promise to meet at 5 Pm , so I equiped myself to the race . But something occur out of my control , my friend wife felt that she will deliver her baby , moreover I took thim to the hospital and she deliver a lovely small boy . So I am sorry my friend because I could not enjoy you , I hopp you all the best
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  1. KirbyDecember 9, 2012 at 4:50 PM

    Wow, it sounds like it was an exciting and dramatic day! I hope you get to go carting another time. Check your use of commas, verb tenses, and transition signals (don't use "moreover" here...you're using time order).

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  2. YAMDecember 9, 2012 at 6:41 PM

    Congratulation. However, for the Kart racing we gonna do it again.

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  3. UnknownDecember 9, 2012 at 6:46 PM

    I hope she is good. Ammar do not worry, we will go there soon.

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